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Fredto Mr. Grumpy
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 297 Location: Canada
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 8:37 am Post subject: Errors and mistakes |
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You can report grammatical errors, wrong spelling or typo mistakes here.
With that, I can make Frankto suffer for all eternity and kick his ass on a daily basis about how dumb he his.
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Frankto Shinobigami
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 8:49 am Post subject: |
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To kick my ass, you'd have to be able to actually reach that high, shorty. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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Fredto Mr. Grumpy
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 297 Location: Canada
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 8:54 am Post subject: ... |
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Please, post only topic related material here. Don't do what Frankto does.
As for being able to reach your ass, I wonder who'd want to do that. and don't destroy my topic or I'll remove you from the board.
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hastur Grandmaster
Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 525
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 9:49 am Post subject: |
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Well it isn't an erroror but I think instead using
Hyuuga Ryu - Jyuuken wrote: | All attacks made in the Jyuuken stance are modified by wisdom, and the user does not get to add his strength modifier to damage. |
you could use wording simmilar to Weapon Finesse feat (Something like that:)
Hyuuga Ryu - Jyuuken wrote: | All attacks made in the Jyuuken use your Dexterity modifier instead of your Strength modifier on attack rolls, and the user does not get to add his strength modifier to damage. |
It will be a litlle easier to understand. (Personally I understood that Wisdom modifier goes to damage not to attack when I first read this)
PS. Make him Suffer Gu4rdian I'll try to find some time and search the file. _________________ Three are the paths of soul:
One out - roam across the plain,
One back - dwell with the tribe and tent,
One in - turn an enemy's hate.
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Elon Shinobigami
Joined: 10 Jan 2005 Posts: 1198 Location: Spain
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:09 am Post subject: |
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I think there's an error on Omote Renge, I warned Frankto but if I post here it will be used as a reminder:
Quote: | In addition, once
the technique is over, the opponent will be stunned for 1d6+1 rounds, time which can be
halved with a successful Fortitude save. opponent, at his highest attack bonus. If the user
knocked the opponent high enough with Kage Buyou so that it should normally suffer
falling damage, the opponent does not get to make a Tumble check to avoid it, and the
user lands safely on his feet... |
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Elon Shinobigami
Joined: 10 Jan 2005 Posts: 1198 Location: Spain
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:12 am Post subject: |
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hastur wrote: | Well it isn't an erroror but I think instead using
Hyuuga Ryu - Jyuuken wrote: | All attacks made in the Jyuuken stance are modified by wisdom, and the user does not get to add his strength modifier to damage. |
you could use wording simmilar to Weapon Finesse feat (Something like that:)
Hyuuga Ryu - Jyuuken wrote: | All attacks made in the Jyuuken use your Dexterity modifier instead of your Strength modifier on attack rolls, and the user does not get to add his strength modifier to damage. |
It will be a litlle easier to understand. (Personally I understood that Wisdom modifier goes to damage not to attack when I first read this)
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I think you are mistaken. I think Jyuuken attacks bonuses are modified by wisdom. You get no bonus to damage from wisdom, but you still can get damage bonuses from talents, synergies (taijutsu ranks) or feats to you Jyuuken attacks. I repeat, since I haven't got the main file here, this how I think it works. _________________ Oden! Guide our ships, our axes, spears and swords! Guide us through storms that whip and in brutal war!
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Frankto Shinobigami
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 7372 Location: Canada
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:14 am Post subject: |
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hastur: Done.
Elon: That was done a few days back. You told me in prerson, remember?
Elon 2: He said that's what he thought at first, but if you read he's saying it's confusing, not that it adds wisdom to Damage. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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hastur Grandmaster
Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 525
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:21 am Post subject: |
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Elon wrote: | I think you are mistaken. I think Jyuuken attacks bonuses are modified by wisdom. You get no bonus to damage from wisdom, but you still can get damage bonuses from talents, synergies (taijutsu ranks) or feats to you Jyuuken attacks. I repeat, since I haven't got the main file here, this how I think it works. |
Read more carefully - I said that I misunderstood it when I read it for the first time because of the unclear wording and thought that it modifies damage - and later after exchanging PM's wit Frankto I was told and it modiefies attack not damage. I suggested changing the wording so that no one else does the mistake I did (and as You can see Frankto changed the wording ) _________________ Three are the paths of soul:
One out - roam across the plain,
One back - dwell with the tribe and tent,
One in - turn an enemy's hate.
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Elon Shinobigami
Joined: 10 Jan 2005 Posts: 1198 Location: Spain
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Ok. I red it more carefully and still understand other thing. Anyway, if you guys understand it, there's no more argument. Keep searching errors... if you can _________________ Oden! Guide our ships, our axes, spears and swords! Guide us through storms that whip and in brutal war!
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sandwichnojutsu Genin
Joined: 21 Apr 2005 Posts: 14
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:15 pm Post subject: |
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In the technique Taijutsu Ougi - Hatafuri Rendan (Taijutsu Secret Technique - Combo Starter) beginning at the third line down. Quote: | Since the user is caught in-between attacks aftet the technique ends.... |
"after" is spelt incorrectly. |
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sandwichnojutsu Genin
Joined: 21 Apr 2005 Posts: 14
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:22 pm Post subject: |
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I do have another question, how nit-picky to you want our grammatical critiques to be? |
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sandwichnojutsu Genin
Joined: 21 Apr 2005 Posts: 14
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 4:02 pm Post subject: |
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Original:
Quote: | Running out of Chakra: Most people have a very small amount of Chakra, and when that Chakra is used up, one simply can?t perform a technique of any sort or do anything else for that matter. Once the Chakra pool is reduced to 0, one must succeed a Fortitude save (DC 20) or be reduced to one tenth of his total hit points (or 1 hit point if current total is below that), and become Exhausted; if the save is successful, the person still
becomes Fatigued and see his current hit points halved. Once a character?s Chakra pool hit 0, it can only perform one attack action or move action and one free action per round. A character who suffers Chakra damage once his Chakra Pool is reduced to 0 is automatically reduced to -1 hit points and dying. Further Chakra damage is converted to Hit Points damage. |
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Quote: | Running out of Chakra: Most people have a very small amount of Chakra. When that Chakra is used up, one simply can?t perform a technique of any sort or do anything else for that matter. Once the Chakra pool is reduced to 0, one must succeed at a Fortitude save (DC 20) or be reduced to one tenth of their total hit points (or 1 hit point if current total is below that), and become Exhausted. If the save is successful, the person still becomes Fatigued and his current hit points are halved. Once a character?s Chakra pool hits 0, they can only perform one attack action or move action and one free action per round. A character who suffers Chakra damage once his Chakra Pool is reduced to 0 is automatically reduced to -1 hit points and dying. Further Chakra damage is converted to
Hit Points damage.
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Frankto Shinobigami
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 7372 Location: Canada
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 4:41 pm Post subject: |
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The Hatafuri Rendan is done. If you're going to be a gramatical critique, point out the modifications made to the text next time. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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sandwichnojutsu Genin
Joined: 21 Apr 2005 Posts: 14
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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no problem |
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Elon Shinobigami
Joined: 10 Jan 2005 Posts: 1198 Location: Spain
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 9:20 am Post subject: |
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Character Sheet:
Didn't you forgot the "Knockout Punch" and "Improved Knockout Punch" feats that are dependent on the Brawl feat? Also the brawl feat seems to be dependent on Blood Pact
If there isn't space you could supress the firearms feats wich (I think) no one will use/allow. _________________ Oden! Guide our ships, our axes, spears and swords! Guide us through storms that whip and in brutal war!
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Frankto Shinobigami
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 7372 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 9:27 am Post subject: |
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I noticed all those errors on the character sheet, and I will not correct them. Why? Because I can't. And even if I could, I wouldn't remove all those feats, because I want to allow the players complete flexibility and the ability to play in any world they desire, which they can. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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cmkawasaki Lazy Programmer
Joined: 21 May 2005 Posts: 3388
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:49 pm Post subject: |
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You made an error on the puppet section, under Ninja tools
Pg. 298:
A Combat Puppet can initially be built using the core (see Creatures
and NPC chapter for details) and 3 weapon points.
It should read something like:
A Combat Puppet can initially be built using the core (see below) and 3 weapon points.
I got confused for a second until I saw the bookmark and found the spot. |
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Frankto Shinobigami
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:52 pm Post subject: |
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Geh, that's true. I should have started the real way anyway.
Like, in the file "see page XX" and when I do the layout, I add the numbers.
Anyways, done. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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Asmodean Chuunin
Joined: 25 May 2005 Posts: 50 Location: Michigan, USA
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:32 pm Post subject: |
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pg 207, Fuyaguma Mizore's occupation is occupation, so I was wondering if you could post rules for that occupation. |
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Frankto Shinobigami
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 7:33 pm Post subject: |
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It should be "Academy Student."
Done, thanks. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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Asmodean Chuunin
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 12:04 pm Post subject: |
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It looks like Amatsu Issen no Ouda requires itself to learn, is this an error or am I reading it wrong? |
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Frankto Shinobigami
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 5:24 pm Post subject: |
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It requires the feat Epic Technique - Amatsu Issen no Ouda. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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taijustu_master Genin
Joined: 17 Jul 2005 Posts: 1
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 11:04 am Post subject: |
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i am not sure if it is an error or not, but, how in the world, do you determine the stats for the Basic Classes? (Strong Hero, Tough Hero, etc.) I dont know the BAB, Will, Ref, Fort, Def, and Specials of them, let alone the darn vit per level, and skills per level... >.< am i missing something? |
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cmkawasaki Lazy Programmer
Joined: 21 May 2005 Posts: 3388
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 11:13 am Post subject: |
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OMG!
Dude... read the stickies.... there's one in every forum, just for this...
D20 Modern has that information... Naruto d20 is a supplement guide... it's USELESS without the D20 Modern Core Rulebook! |
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Frankto Shinobigami
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 7372 Location: Canada
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 12:02 pm Post subject: |
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And I even bothered to add an introduction too.
READ.
THE.
DAMN.
INTRODUCTION. _________________ "It's like making a cake, but instead of a cake it's a game and instead of frosting I have no life."
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Elon Shinobigami
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 12:03 pm Post subject: |
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People didn't even read the introduction. How many times should we say that NARUTO d20 IS A D20 MODERN SUPPLEMENT? _________________ Oden! Guide our ships, our axes, spears and swords! Guide us through storms that whip and in brutal war!
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cmkawasaki Lazy Programmer
Joined: 21 May 2005 Posts: 3388
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 12:14 pm Post subject: |
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You know? I think we are scaring the weak-minded off of the board, one user at a time... by cutting their heads off as soon as they ask the first stupid question... |
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Elon Shinobigami
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 2:03 pm Post subject: |
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It's doesn't matters. How the hell people asks even BEFORE reading a simple introduction? _________________ Oden! Guide our ships, our axes, spears and swords! Guide us through storms that whip and in brutal war!
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cmkawasaki Lazy Programmer
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 2:06 pm Post subject: |
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I've seen stupider people... you have to ask them to read the rules... and state in that set of rules to read the entire guide before asking a question on the forums... that solves about a third of the questions. |
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cmkawasaki Lazy Programmer
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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There is an error in the epic Charismatic hero's listing.... in the epic bonus feats, it called the hero a strong hero, like you duplicated the 5 heroes over and over again and just never renamed it. |
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