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demoralizer ANBU Leader
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:29 am Post subject: Saito Shinichi |
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Enjoy! And as always your feedback is appreciated.
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ultima22689 Kage
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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I think this looks pretty good, the anatomy looks on point and his position seems fine too. My only real critique is that his off hand's fingers look a little small, perhaps you could find a better way to represent that his fingers are bending as I think that's the reason that I get that sort of perception. |
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demoralizer ANBU Leader
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:51 pm Post subject: |
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Your exactly right. I have to admit i have been getting that alot. The real explanation has to be the length i had left on the paper. Lol |
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Dairius_Chi Situationally Useful
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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You could always draw his knuckles coming out over the fingertips, if done wrong it might just look like he's missing the tips of his fingers though...
Also, maybe bending the off-hand's thumb might lead one to assume the rest on that hand are so as well |
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demoralizer ANBU Leader
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:55 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you for your feedback. I tried bending the thumb but it missed the plane when i did. I have worked alot on my hands. They are my weakness when I am drawing open hands. Thanks again. |
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simba Guest
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:43 pm Post subject: |
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Nice. Thanks for posting. Keep up the good work. |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Dear simba,
Please don't reply to topics that are a year old.
Sincerely,
Everyone on the internet. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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