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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
Joined: 27 Jul 2005 Posts: 3197 Location: Netherlands
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Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:58 pm Post subject: Introducing the NarutoD20 Redux |
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Update 1.3 is now live!
Change log:
No specifics recorded. A few minor fixes have been implemented, no major changes to the text.
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Ladies and gentlemen of this fine community, I present to you the results of a few months of hard work: The NarutoD20 Redux!
What is a Redux? I'm glad you asked. The Redux is an attempt to reduce the Main File down to its functional essence. By changing the formatting and use of language, as well as condensing and reorganising some information, I hope to have improved the usability of the file, and perhaps help take the edge off for newer players, to whom the extensive amount of new rules and options can be intimidating.
That said, this file is a work in progress. I hope to have cleared out most of the bugs and errors, but it's always possible some have slipped through the cracks. I hope you will consider reporting any mistakes or errors you find (you can respond to this thread, send me a private message or message me on Discord).
This file will be different from NarutoD20, but does not change the rules (except for addressing some inconsistencies). The main difference is formatting, language and organisation:
- Feats have been organised in groups.
- The Beastlord and Beastmaster classes have been moved to the Bloodlines and Templates chapter, since they require the Moujuu Aishou template.
- Techniques have been split up into their main types (Chakra Control, Fuinjutsu, Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Training), and Hijutsu and Kinjutsu have been separated into their own section. In addition, the basic Shadow ninjutsu techniques have been moved to the Special Styles and Schools section (as they require a special feat).
- Some techniques have been renamed by removing part of their name: (Shinobi Hiken becomes Hiken. Some Fuinjutsu no longer start with Fuinjutsu:, this kind of thing).
- The Quests and Events chapter has been merged into the Game Mastering chapter.
Currently in the works:
- Completing the Index
- Completing the Appendices (filling them up, Adding Appendix C to include the example adventures from the main file).
If you have any suggestions or comments, they are more than welcome!
The file can be found here (Current version: 1.3) _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh*
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RinVindor Hunter-Nin
Joined: 16 Feb 2016 Posts: 206 Location: Florida
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hylee Genin
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2017 1:51 am Post subject: |
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very nice! i'll have to take a look at it and give feed back |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
Joined: 27 Jul 2005 Posts: 3197 Location: Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 1:34 am Post subject: |
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Update: Due to health issues I've been unable to put in any real work on the Redux for the past month or so. However, many new fixes and changes have already been made, and I hope to present the v1.0 within the next few weeks. It most likely still will not be 100% error-proof, but I'm aiming for 99%, which seems attainable. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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RinVindor Hunter-Nin
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
Joined: 27 Jul 2005 Posts: 3197 Location: Netherlands
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2017 8:17 am Post subject: |
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Health issues have been mostly resolved (after they came back with a vengeance T_T) and work has resumed! Expect an update in the coming weeks, if I don't pass out from all these index markers I have to add >_> _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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dragon0478 Genin
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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A minor note, I couldn't find the starting number of techniques in here. I just found this so I'll post things I notice as I find them. |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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dragon0478 wrote: | A minor note, I couldn't find the starting number of techniques in here. I just found this so I'll post things I notice as I find them. |
'Character Creation' Page 9. The second to last bullet point says 'Select your starting techniques (see below).'
Immediately below the bullet point list is Starting Techniques. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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dragon0478 Genin
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2017 3:02 pm Post subject: |
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Athildur wrote: | 'Character Creation' Page 9. The second to last bullet point says 'Select your starting techniques (see below).'
Immediately below the bullet point list is Starting Techniques. |
I'm not seeing that in the current version. Even just searching for 'creation' doesn't give me anything for character creation. Maybe you're looking at a different version than me? I have v0.9.9. |
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Danny900 Genin
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Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:35 pm Post subject: |
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I found that "henge no jutsu" is missing in the tecniques index of the redux 0.9.9 version, by the way let me compliment for the hard work with this redux version!! |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2017 7:49 am Post subject: |
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Ladies and gents. Version 1.0 is up! Containing numerous small errors and formatting quirks.
The one thing that is not yet done is the NPCs Appendix. Anyone willing to give me a hand is more than welcome, since I hate building NPCs >_>
If I have missed one of your suggestions, I do apologize, it can be difficult to keep track of everything. Just let me know and I can implement a fix for the next version. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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ultima22689 Kage
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2017 12:15 pm Post subject: |
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Athildur wrote: | Ladies and gents. Version 1.0 is up! Containing numerous small errors and formatting quirks.
The one thing that is not yet done is the NPCs Appendix. Anyone willing to give me a hand is more than welcome, since I hate building NPCs >_>
If I have missed one of your suggestions, I do apologize, it can be difficult to keep track of everything. Just let me know and I can implement a fix for the next version. |
Kudos my man, you're the MVP for this. |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2019 12:40 pm Post subject: |
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A new update has arrived! Check the main post. Download link remains unchanged. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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chaoticangel97 Younin
Joined: 03 Sep 2009 Posts: 384
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2019 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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Why’d you change Rasenshuriken’s name? |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2019 7:31 pm Post subject: |
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chaoticangel97 wrote: | Why’d you change Rasenshuriken’s name? |
Because the technique isn't rasenshuriken, it's fuuton:rasengan, going by canon.
Edit: I have been notified that I have misinformed myself. The technique shall be named back to what it should be on the next update. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2020 6:17 pm Post subject: |
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Update 1.25 is now live. Download link can be found in the first post. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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Athildur Sexually progressive Valkyrie
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2021 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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Update 1.3 has been live for a while. The download link was temporarily nonfunctional because of a Google Drive security update, it should be functional once again. _________________ Oy, this is going to be troublesome *sigh* |
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